

My preliminary task resulted in me creating the bog standard; unprofessional contents page for a magazine. I took a few aspects I liked from the magazine and changed a lot of aspects I didn’t in order to create my final contents page which I think achieves a more professional look.
I only featured one image into my preliminary task and that photo was taken with a poor quality camera, for the final contents page I used a camera with high quality capturing. I cut the model out in the preliminary task with the polygon lasso tool; this was an unprofessional method as it left harsh edges that weren’t realistic. The model’s hair also faded into the background which I didn’t like, I noticed this and changed my contents composition so that all images didn’t need cutting out yet still looked professional. I did however like the experimentation with camera angles; I snapped the model in the preliminary task at a low angle: I also done this for the main image in my final contents page as I wanted a range of interesting photographs to keep my young audience interested. Another aspect I took further into my final product was the “regulars” section. I liked the bordering idea I applied in the preliminary task and advanced this in my content page for my final piece, I made the border a lot tighter so the text was structured and didn’t get lost within the boundary. I applied my colour palette too; this was to reinforce my brand identity. I noticed a couple of grammar and spelling mistakes in my preliminary task: “school internext” this typo could really affect the readerships views on my magazine’s professionalism and so I checked my final product numerous amounts of times to ensure there were no mistakes. I liked how I had a mini heading for each listed page then some further information on the heading, I processed this idea into my final piece and used a bolder font to apply contrast instead of applying colour as I didn’t want to overuse my colour scheme. I noticed that on my page directory I hadn’t listed what page number these features are on, this would have been costly in the magazine industry as the contents page isn’t doing its job. I used the font I used for my masthead for these numbers, along with the date of the issue to keep to my house style.
The magazine improved drastically however I did think it was important to do the preliminary task as it acted as a guide where to go with my official product.

My preliminary task is visibly a much weaker product in comparison to my finished magazine front cover. These two images work in contrast to each other to prove how my media skills have developed over the process.
One of the most important elements in magazine design is the masthead, on my preliminary task I layer my standard – boring white font on top of a boring yellow, firstly these two colours do not work well together, the yellow is too light for the white and this doesn’t make the masthead standout. I used this yellow as part of my colour scheme on the preliminary task, I used this yellow for the majority of assets such as the cover lines, banner, pricing, date and boarder of price: I have over used the colour this results in not achieving any contrast, the colour palette is meant to stand features out from the background however it doesn’t. The masthead on my finished product is much stronger, the font I chose is extremely appropriate as it will attract my target audience. I also applied my colour scheme into the masthead in a more constructive way. In my finished product I attained 4 different colours in my palette whereas in my preliminary I only used 3 which is why I over used the emphasising colour too much ruining the effect. When glancing at my finished product I added my colours more effectively; instead of writing all text in the colours I only applied colour when I wanted a particular word or name to stand out which caught the audience’s eye more. The audience should read “new album” as it is in the main part of red surrounded by white, after they read “new album” they will automatically want to know what band is bringing out a new album an automatically be interested in my magazine, I applied my colour scheme to achieve contrast, contrast is a principle in design. I captured my model with a high quality camera in my finished product to achieve a professional look, in my preliminary task I captured the image with a phone meaning the image was of low quality, proving a less professional magazine. The model in the preliminary task was flicking through a book when I photographed him; this resulted in the camera capturing this motion and worsened the quality of the image. I made sure my model was as still as possible whilst maintaining a relaxed look on his face. However I did like the way the model in my preliminary task was looking in direct address towards the audience; I applied this technique in my finished product and believe it works well. Underneath the image in both magazines is a banner sealing off the bottom of the images. I didn’t include anything in my banner on the preliminary task however liked the composition that came with the banner; therefore I included it in my final product. I decided to include a feature article from my magazine on the banner to take advantage of the space, I also did it to show it is a segment which is different to a standard cover line article therefore I applied it in a different manner. I minimised the sizing of the pricing on the final product as in the first task the “50p” was too big and took attention away from cover lines and the image. It was also done in a font I have included in my house style. Lowering the size of the price gave a more professional appeal to my final product.
Overall I think it is clear that my skills have improved over the process. I also think the making of the preliminary task was a key part to the success in my final product as I took forward the ideas I liked and substituted the ideas I didn’t and analysed why I didn’t like them and changed it in favour of that reason.